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finer facets- poetic meaning

February 5th, 2010 at 20:18

I thought I was home free at 37 weeks and 4 days

it hit home that I would never bring him home when there was no heartbeat

the pain I felt in my breasts two days later drove it home even further that he was gone

nothing I did or said could truely bring home to others what I was going through

3 Responses to “finer facets- poetic meaning”

  1. OM Says:

    I imagine it’s even worse now, trying to bring home to other what you are still going through. It just seems that fewer and fewer people ‘get it’ the farther we move from the date our children died. Feeling alone more now than then. At least that’s my experience.

    Love to you, my friend.

    Well, I found you. :) The only available option I see for me to change my comments settings is to accept anonymous comments (which I won’t do b/c of sniper attacks) or those with google accounts (which I think would limit comments more). I don’t know. I’ll list your blog in my sidebar so I can at least see when you post. It will be a work in progress.

    I wish you well.


  2. Amy Says:

    So true, all of your words. Creative way to look at and use the word home.

  3. Angie Says:

    I love how you play with all the homes here. xo

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